I like this clean line drawing, this piece that you call your old pencil sketch , it really made my day when I was viewing your gallery, impressive. Thanks for sharing the piece and the rest of your art work.
I know you're getting lots of faves today, but I really had to comment on this. It really reminds me of Betsy "Psylock" Braddock. I think this would have been more Betsy's style than the "sexy ninja" outfit if she'd worked more with her brother.
Wonderful linework, and yes you should color this one up. I'm not one too talk, I haven't colored hardly any of my work. But like you I'm partial to Asian chicks, must be the "anime eyes". Couldn't stand it had to marry one. Check me out [link]